5.04.2008

My Turn

Glenn Hager has organized a synchroblog for Monday May 5th, entitled "Your Turn", where he asks "How are you doing? What are you doing? What are you learning?What are you dreaming about?" This is my contribution.


My dreams are wafting around my head,
like smoke from a cigar,
trying to find some ground to stand on;
still, nothing but clouds and air,
sometimes rain.
I now find the greatest triumph
in the freedom
to tell someone they are loved no less
for questioning, seeking, or doubting.
The path is wide and winding
not narrow, nor straight,
purpose is in the adventure,
not in the destination,
and I have the blisters to prove it.
It feels right to be this free
like the ocean swirling around my ankles
with all its vengeance in the surge
sucking the sand from between my toes,
still I do not lose my footing.
Beyond that
my horizons say to watch, listen and learn
for silence serves to calm,
and peace becomes more apparent
when I stop trying so hard.



Please visit my fellow synchrobloggers:

Mike: "Lost or Found (Depends on your view)"
Lyn: "Your Turn"
Sarah: "Glenn's May Synchroblog"
Jane/Tera Rose: "Part 1", "Part 2", "Part 3", & "Part 4"
Alan: "You Are Here"
Barb: "One Year Checkup"
Kathy: "It stinks down here, but I really love the smell"
Heidi: "May Synchroblog"
Jeromy: "Our Story, Chapter 10"
Glenn: "Feeling Free"
Happy: "Better Late than Never"
Rachel: "Synchroblog"


25 comments:

  1. AWESOME...

    purely awesome :)
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  2. Wow.

    I am linking to this today, its incredible.

    It speaks to me so loud and clear and so beautifully. You have a gift with words, Word!
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  3. I'm not sure which I'm in greater awe of....the sentiments expressed or the beautiful symbolism used to express them.

    -- Jarred.
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  4. "like the ocean swirling around my ankles with all its vengeance in the surge sucking the sand from between my toes, still I do not lose my footing."

    I will need to sit with that word-picture for some time and let it sink in. Thank you for sharing your heart and your poetic words.
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  5. A truly touching poem, Erin. And thank you for putting it so artfully.
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  6. Thanks Tera Rose ~ I appreciate that.
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  7. Barbara ~ Wow. Thanks. Sometimes I have a gift. but often it doesn't turn up when I plan on it.
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  8. Jarred ~ Sometimes I'm not sure if you're serious or just flattering me, but I'll take it either way. ;-)
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  9. Jeromy ~ Thanks for stopping by. I'm glad it was meaningful to you. It's really how I feel.
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  10. Thanks Jeff, once in awhile my inner poet surfaces.
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  11. beautiful, breathtakingly beautiful...
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  12. "Peace becomes apparent when I stop trying so hard"

    I have found that as well. This is another example of the great thoughts that I have come to know you for.

    You are an inspiration.
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  13. Thanks Kathy. Short and sweet.
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  14. Mike - Wow, thanks. I'm glad so many people found it interesting...I guess it's jsut born of experience.
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  15. Thanks, Jarred. You're too nice!
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  16. You're most welcome.

    And I'll endeavor to be less nice (meaner?) in the future. ;)
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  17. Erin!! You should write more often!!! :)

    Jet lag is kickin my butt today but I am anxious to see you and get caught up! Love you!!
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  18. I finally got mine in, a day late:

    http://poorinspirit.blogspot.com/2008/05/synchroblog-day-late.html
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  19. Wonderful piece, Erin. Obviously you inspired me.
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  20. Gary - Be sure to leave a link over at Glenn's, too.

    Thanks so much. I am going to read yours right now.
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  21. Jarred - Don't you dare! ;-)
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  22. Donna - Thank you. I'm glad you're back!
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  23. Beautiful, chickie!!

    (Shame you're a polytheist and going straight to hell)

    Sorry. I'll stop going on about that soon. I just find it very amusing :)
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  24. That's OK Sue, I thought it was amusing, too.
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